<![CDATA[Remort Descriptions]]>Alright about a week before Sent went down Nimue and I volunteered to do Remort Descriptions. We split the Neutral remorts while she took all the Good Remorts and I choose the Evil ones. Well needless to say I started these way back when Sentience was down and haven't redone them yet. The reason for that is because I want to know what people think of my ideas for the race. While Syn gave me a basic guideline for all of them some of them I winged it a little(espeacally for Avatar since no one has any ideas what they were) I still have to do Naga and Hell Baron which I'll probably do later but I wanted to get opions on these. They probably won't be put up for a little but hey, it's something for us to talk away while we while away the time before Sentience comes back up :).

Avatar- From a distance these look like your run of the mill human beings. That is until closer inspection. These beings are tall, no where near as tall as the other remort races but much taller then your average human. Looking at them close up reveals another odd detail. Everything about them seems long. Long Hair, Long nails and Long limbs, giving them a very lanky apperance. But don't be fooled, every muscele is full of power no human could hope to achieve, each of these avatars could easily outrun a wolf. Their eyes have to be the oddest thing about them. There is no true color to them, just the vast blackness of the pupil which takes up the whole eye. But within that pupil shines a faint white light in a starburst pattern. Indeed this glow seems to surround the entire being. Literally making the air ripple visiblely with each movement. The effect can be quite unsettling and even distractive in battle. Said to posses untold strength and wisdom, it is hard to believe this was once human.

Wraith- Many people have been in the presenece of wraiths but have mistake them for patches of mist or fog. Indeed though that is what they are. These humanoid creatures look like nothing but puffs of smoke given form. Naked they could pass as an odd patch of fog floating here or there and if in a mist will become impossible to spot. This gives them a great advantage in battle since you cannot hit what you can not see. But most of the time Wraith's can be found wearing cloths or armor which gives away their form in a rather unsettling way. Not many people are use to seeing walking patches of fog wearing armor or weilding a weapon. Their eyes are much like the clouds in the sky with two pin pricks of black serving as pupils. Though appearing as mist they are indeed very solid and can weild great power to become a formable foe.

Shur(Currently Specter)- The first thought that comes to mind is elf until the creamy pale skin that no elf posses is noticed. From there the dark hair and even darker eyes are easily spotted on this creature's pale form. The last thing noticed but not quickly forgotten are the six feathry angel wings on its back, each the color of pitch. That can mean it is a Shur, the sinsiter counter part of the Seraph. The males all are very handsome and the females hold a beauty rivaled only by the Seraph. Bt this is a dark beauty as reflected in their movements. They are very elegant indeed but it is a dangerous elegance that brings to mind a picture of a hunter slowing stalking its prey. They think themselves to be the highest of all races and constently look down upon the others with snears and cold gazes. Most times they won't even trust a fellow Shur unless it benifits it's own personal gain. Cold, Calculating and unmerciful in battle, they may not be mindless killers but their evil ways will have many begging for death when faceing them.

Fiend- At first this creature appears a dark shape on the even darker background of the night. A closer look reveals dark tainted skin and long, horrible claws. The face looks almost humanoid but certain features are distorted giving fiends a very demon like apperance. Fiends tend to have dark red eyes glowing with malice and long piercing fangs that gleam in the moonlight. Large bat-like wings rest on their backs, ready to unfold and take flight after the prey it uses to settle its deep thirst for blood. The closest thing to a demon in its natural form these creatures are not pleasent to look at. Though they do posses a great ability. Each holds the power the Shift there form. This ability allows them to change into a more, pleasent form and is also a god way to surprise a foe in battle or blend in at a town.

Yeah well, they suck I know. I hope you like them though. I really hope you like the Avatar idea. I really couldn't think of anythign else since Syn said they couldn't have tails or horns or wings etc etc. Well, I humblely await your replys. ;)

]]>https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/topic/12/remort-descriptionsRSS for NodeWed, 15 Apr 2026 19:38:22 GMTSat, 06 Mar 2004 19:17:56 GMT60<![CDATA[Reply to Remort Descriptions on Wed, 21 Jul 2004 20:29:56 GMT]]><quote author="Elmah">@Elmah:

Those would be some frightening Seraphim Xavis.

One thing I thought I'd mention about the Seraph. Aren't they supposed to have some kind of red glow, due to the fact that they are the highest choir of angels? I seem to remember some work that describes them as so anyhow….

Well here's another description I can help with.... Hell Baron.

This is a taken directly from the DOOM manual:

Tough as a dump truck and nearly as big, these Goliaths are the worst things on two legs since Tyrannosaurus rex

For those of you who haven't played DOOM, the Barons of Hell were tall bastards, with pink heads and torsos, and brown legs, with dark hooves. They had spiraly horns on their head, and pissed-off looking bovine faces. No tails (that I ever noticed anyway), and the hands were indeed hands, not hooves.

Like the drow, I think this can vary from player to player...

But if someone doing the description wants to look at some pictures of a baron of hell.... here. Some site on Doom I found: http://www-lce.eng.cam.ac.uk/~fms27/doomzoo/boss.html</quote>

personally, i like the demon for the hellbaron description, in spite of the fact that it's not the namesake. also, i think the arch-vile is a dead ringer for a fiend (vamp remort, for those newbs out there) 'cept he needs wings. so…. food for thought. thar ya go. 8)

]]>https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/2465https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/2465Wed, 21 Jul 2004 20:29:56 GMT<![CDATA[Reply to Remort Descriptions on Fri, 09 Jul 2004 03:46:26 GMT]]>Oh so I AM the first! How cool! I can die happy now. :D

]]>https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/2425https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/2425Fri, 09 Jul 2004 03:46:26 GMT<![CDATA[Reply to Remort Descriptions on Thu, 01 Jul 2004 20:52:41 GMT]]>congratulations Pecus! You're number 1!

]]>https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/2369https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/2369Thu, 01 Jul 2004 20:52:41 GMT<![CDATA[Reply to Remort Descriptions on Thu, 01 Jul 2004 11:15:03 GMT]]><quote author="Anonymous">@Anonymous:

actually Pecus, You're the second Avatar. Alatarr is the first :P</quote> actually alatarr is still lv115 mortal, there are 2 avatar's and Leena is the only other one(and she's an imm). So unless someone's been deleted I'd say Pecus is the first 8)

]]>https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/2366https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/2366Thu, 01 Jul 2004 11:15:03 GMT<![CDATA[Reply to Remort Descriptions on Wed, 30 Jun 2004 22:45:24 GMT]]>Second place again :roll: LOL

]]>https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/2364https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/2364Wed, 30 Jun 2004 22:45:24 GMT<![CDATA[Reply to Remort Descriptions on Wed, 30 Jun 2004 02:36:28 GMT]]>actually Pecus, You're the second Avatar. Alatarr is the first :P

]]>https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/2360https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/2360Wed, 30 Jun 2004 02:36:28 GMT<![CDATA[Reply to Remort Descriptions on Tue, 29 Jun 2004 21:09:09 GMT]]>I agree that that discription is both badly written and portrays Avatars pretty poorly. I am at a loss for a new name for Human remorts as well. Even though I agree that Avatar may not be the best name, until we see a decent one suggested, it will have to do. Congrats on your remort though :)

]]>https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/2359https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/2359Tue, 29 Jun 2004 21:09:09 GMT<![CDATA[Reply to Remort Descriptions on Tue, 29 Jun 2004 18:31:08 GMT]]><quote>> Avatar- From a distance these look like your run of the mill human beings. That is until closer inspection. These beings are tall, no where near as tall as the other remort races but much taller then your average human. Looking at them close up reveals another odd detail. Everything about them seems long. Long Hair, Long nails and Long limbs, giving them a very lanky apperance. But don't be fooled, every muscele is full of power no human could hope to achieve, each of these avatars could easily outrun a wolf. Their eyes have to be the oddest thing about them. There is no true color to them, just the vast blackness of the pupil which takes up the whole eye. But within that pupil shines a faint white light in a starburst pattern. Indeed this glow seems to surround the entire being. Literally making the air ripple visiblely with each movement. The effect can be quite unsettling and even distractive in battle. Said to posses untold strength and wisdom, it is hard to believe this was once human.</quote>

I really dislike the Avatar discription. Even the name Avatar sounds kinda errr pretty lame. There has to be a better monicker for remort human. I don't have a name in mind but about anything would sound better. Now the description, why would the mutate into the thing above? Seems to me the eyes would be sharp and flashing. Long nails? sounds like a hag, unkempt. Long arms? I would think they'd be toned from all the fighting & practice. If he's so tall and lanky (like Warren the restringer?) won't his legs be dragging the ground when he's on his mount? j/k sorta I've actually seen that, a long legged fella on horseback, legs dragging. :lol: Being the first AvAtAr has no bearing on my dislike for the discription :yes:

]]>https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/2358https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/2358Tue, 29 Jun 2004 18:31:08 GMT<![CDATA[Reply to Remort Descriptions on Thu, 13 May 2004 09:01:58 GMT]]>Scratch that, there's an even better description of what a fiend would be like. When Dracula transforms in the movie Van Helsing, that's what a fiend would look like eh? Except it'd be black with red eyes.

]]>https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/2266https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/2266Thu, 13 May 2004 09:01:58 GMT<![CDATA[Reply to Remort Descriptions on Fri, 16 Apr 2004 12:15:48 GMT]]>Oh, and FANGS, I forgot about those long, gleaming, sexy fangs!

]]>https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/1942https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/1942Fri, 16 Apr 2004 12:15:48 GMT<![CDATA[Reply to Remort Descriptions on Thu, 15 Apr 2004 12:56:58 GMT]]>Just read through those descriptions and they look pretty good Leena. I had an idea of how the Fiends would look (following your description). If you've seen the movie Underworld, think of that guy at the end when he's a cross between vampire and werewolf, with the black skin. The Fiend would kinda look like that with those red eyes, larger claws and those wings, and of course bigger…hehe. That'd be pretty wicked looking. :twisted:

]]>https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/1925https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/1925Thu, 15 Apr 2004 12:56:58 GMT<![CDATA[Reply to Remort Descriptions on Wed, 07 Apr 2004 08:56:41 GMT]]>I know we're talking about it.

]]>https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/1716https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/1716Wed, 07 Apr 2004 08:56:41 GMT<![CDATA[Reply to Remort Descriptions on Tue, 06 Apr 2004 15:28:48 GMT]]>Yeah its not me who is doing those. It is Nimue. And I will be doing the rest of mine shortly but I have some other work that needs to be done first as itis on a time limit ;)

]]>https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/1689https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/1689Tue, 06 Apr 2004 15:28:48 GMT<![CDATA[Reply to Remort Descriptions on Tue, 06 Apr 2004 14:13:00 GMT]]><quote author="Elmah">@Elmah:

Well here's another description I can help with…. Hell Baron.

This is a taken directly from the DOOM manual:</quote>

As I've said before, Minotaurs on steroids with a heaping side order of rage and chaos. :D

I vote that Madcow be changed to Hell Baron so that Ertai can be the only true Minotaur immortal. >.> Madcow seems more fitting as the beast where Ertai is just a sexy bovine. :D :rofl:

]]>https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/1686https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/1686Tue, 06 Apr 2004 14:13:00 GMT<![CDATA[Reply to Remort Descriptions on Tue, 06 Apr 2004 12:22:44 GMT]]>You're talking to the wrong person Jazelle. Leena isn't doing the descriptions for the good remort races.

]]>https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/1676https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/1676Tue, 06 Apr 2004 12:22:44 GMT<![CDATA[Reply to Remort Descriptions on Tue, 06 Apr 2004 11:54:17 GMT]]><quote author="Leena">@Leena:

Hehe, mitten that solution works quite nicely. The descrption can be altered to say that the skin does not look quite healthy as pasty white skin nor deep black skin is quite considered healthy. As for Seraph….they are the defination of beauty. I think we all prety much know what a Seraph looks like.</quote>

Still need a description anyway for those who don't.

]]>https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/1673https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/1673Tue, 06 Apr 2004 11:54:17 GMT<![CDATA[Reply to Remort Descriptions on Tue, 06 Apr 2004 11:25:09 GMT]]>Those would be some frightening Seraphim Xavis.

One thing I thought I'd mention about the Seraph. Aren't they supposed to have some kind of red glow, due to the fact that they are the highest choir of angels? I seem to remember some work that describes them as so anyhow….

Well here's another description I can help with.... Hell Baron.

This is a taken directly from the DOOM manual:

Tough as a dump truck and nearly as big, these Goliaths are the worst things on two legs since Tyrannosaurus rex

For those of you who haven't played DOOM, the Barons of Hell were tall bastards, with pink heads and torsos, and brown legs, with dark hooves. They had spiraly horns on their head, and pissed-off looking bovine faces. No tails (that I ever noticed anyway), and the hands were indeed hands, not hooves.

Like the drow, I think this can vary from player to player...

But if someone doing the description wants to look at some pictures of a baron of hell.... here. Some site on Doom I found: http://www-lce.eng.cam.ac.uk/~fms27/doomzoo/boss.html

]]>https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/1672https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/1672Tue, 06 Apr 2004 11:25:09 GMT<![CDATA[Reply to Remort Descriptions on Tue, 06 Apr 2004 07:44:48 GMT]]>Like me RL

]]>https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/1670https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/1670Tue, 06 Apr 2004 07:44:48 GMT<![CDATA[Reply to Remort Descriptions on Tue, 06 Apr 2004 04:01:05 GMT]]>Hehe, mitten that solution works quite nicely. The descrption can be altered to say that the skin does not look quite healthy as pasty white skin nor deep black skin is quite considered healthy. As for Seraph….they are the defination of beauty. I think we all prety much know what a Seraph looks like.

]]>https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/1669https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/1669Tue, 06 Apr 2004 04:01:05 GMT<![CDATA[Reply to Remort Descriptions on Mon, 05 Apr 2004 22:37:51 GMT]]>These are general descriptions, yeah? So variation is acceptable. If it were each persons individual one, I'd say have them write their own, but in this case you could say that skin color is either bone white or midnight black. Etc. As long as you make it clear that the skin doesn't look quite healthy, as opposed to the perfect flawless healthy Seraph skin it should be relatively simple.

]]>https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/1659https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/1659Mon, 05 Apr 2004 22:37:51 GMT<![CDATA[Reply to Remort Descriptions on Mon, 05 Apr 2004 16:31:45 GMT]]><quote author="Leena">@Leena:

How about we just make it both? Some retain their black skin and white hair and some gain pale skin and black hair?</quote>

Ok so what do the Seraph look like then?

]]>https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/1657https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/1657Mon, 05 Apr 2004 16:31:45 GMT<![CDATA[Reply to Remort Descriptions on Mon, 05 Apr 2004 16:03:44 GMT]]>How about we just make it both? Some retain their black skin and white hair and some gain pale skin and black hair?

]]>https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/1656https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/1656Mon, 05 Apr 2004 16:03:44 GMT<![CDATA[Reply to Remort Descriptions on Mon, 05 Apr 2004 14:25:04 GMT]]><quote author="Xavis">@Xavis:

Why not black skin, white hair, white wings with black splotches or streaks in them. Like if the pureness of the wings are tainted with Drow evil :P</quote>
That's what I said a few posts ago, the patterns on the wings. I think that would be pretty nifty, but I think the whole point is that once you get to spector you're pretty much at the pinnacle of your corruption and taint ;)

]]>https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/1654https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/1654Mon, 05 Apr 2004 14:25:04 GMT<![CDATA[Reply to Remort Descriptions on Mon, 05 Apr 2004 09:11:04 GMT]]>Why not black skin, white hair, white wings with black splotches or streaks in them. Like if the pureness of the wings are tainted with Drow evil :P

]]>https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/1651https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/1651Mon, 05 Apr 2004 09:11:04 GMT