<![CDATA[+3 Spell of Whoop Ass]]>The Legendary Necromancer

Enjoy! Comment if you like it :P

]]>https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/topic/153/3-spell-of-whoop-assRSS for NodeThu, 16 Apr 2026 01:13:35 GMTMon, 14 Jun 2004 05:06:09 GMT60<![CDATA[Reply to +3 Spell of Whoop Ass on Tue, 15 Jun 2004 19:47:16 GMT]]>I just re-read it, so I get it now. I hadn't slept in a while when I read it the first time. smiles

Its a very good story. I think maybe some more background info on the characters would make it a lot better though. Maybe some info on Mercedes' family, and the council, and maybe a brief bit about why Mercedes responds to Natalia the way she does. It would add depth to an already great story.

Oh, and one minor correction. You have Chapter 6 in there twice.

Thanks for sharing that story! I really like it.

Zala

]]>https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/2326https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/2326Tue, 15 Jun 2004 19:47:16 GMT<![CDATA[Reply to +3 Spell of Whoop Ass on Tue, 15 Jun 2004 06:01:25 GMT]]>which parts confused ya? :P

]]>https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/2324https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/2324Tue, 15 Jun 2004 06:01:25 GMT<![CDATA[Reply to +3 Spell of Whoop Ass on Tue, 15 Jun 2004 00:03:43 GMT]]>Ooooo! I like it! There are a few confusing parts, but overall, a very good story. grins Well done.

Zala

]]>https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/2323https://forum.v2.sentiencemud.net/post/2323Tue, 15 Jun 2004 00:03:43 GMT